Apartment 16
The ending was not really up to much. It ended with a whimper rather than a bang. It left me feeling a bit hard done by. What was the point of the story exactly. Stories are meant to move from A to B. On occasion you even get a C or D thrown in. Think of what the book version of the movie INCEPTION, for instance might be like. Instead this moves awkwardly from A to C and back again.It started so well, but the author, like some of his characters could not or would not roam to far away from home,even through there were numerous possibilities. It was unsatisfactory.
